If anyone here has experience with speech writing or public speaking, would you mind taking a look at my draft? I am mainly looking for feedback on the pacing and how to balance a professional tone with some personal storytelling. Any tips on how to make the conclusion more memorable would also be greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance for the help!
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My best friend asked me to be his best man and I panicked immediately. I'm terrible at public speaking and had no idea how to write something funny but heartfelt. Found a online and gave them some stories help with writing a speech about our friendship. They sent back a draft that actually sounded like me but way more polished. I practiced it a few times and the delivery went perfectly. People laughed at the right moments and the groom actually teared up. Saved me from embarrassing myself in front of two hundred people.